Oxford Big Read 2022閱讀創作比賽(高小組)


活動名稱:Oxford Big Read 2022閱讀創作比賽(高小組)


Entry:  A Christmas Carol by Charles Dickens




You explain the story very clearly and your sentence construction is good. I was impressed by your compassion for Scrooge and your thoughts about what made him so mean to begin with. Your idea for what could be changed in the story is inventive. In fact that could be a good beginning for a creative writing exercise. You draw some clear morals from this story, and your writing shows you have thought deeply about them. All in all, this is an effective review which would convince me to read the book. Good work!